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Moreki 8th revision Color

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Colored version of "moreki 8th revision greyscale"
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This is a cute piece. Very dynamic, but I feel like I should critique some things.

First: The anatomy is all wrong. Her head is not the right size for her body. Why is her bicep the same size as her forearm? That's just not natural. Her eyes are HUGE. She kinda looks like a dragonfly in that way.

Her legs. Her thigh and the rest of the leg are off proportion. She has incredibly small feel wth is up with that.

Her swords. There are no discernible place where they are actually attached to her ass. Like. A band or something would be nice? Come on, man.
WHERE have you seen purple hair matching her clothes color? That is NOT fabulous, my dear.
Nice attempt at the coolio thunder thing. But thinder has no outline. It is energy, light.

JESUS those are tiny ass hands! Long forearm is looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong.
Her ears are starting above the eyes in comparison on her head.....

But at least you remembered to add a nice green on her clothes so it LOOKS like light is reflecting~~

Very kawaii~~